Could you pretty pretty pretty pretty please critique my poem really really bad poem—”Freedom from an Abyss”?
ok so i wrote this poem. and it sucks. critique!!!
Stumbled, then unsuspecting:
fell into a pit of despair.
My personal abyss, vast as the sky,
as deep as ravines and oceans,
expansive and desolate as deserts.
An aura of hopelessness clung to me.
staining remnants of my joy,
tainting my sub consciousness
with intrusive ideas to make it end.
I hit the bottom of the abyss.
In darkness I wandered.
Utterly blinded.
Stumbled, then unsuspecting:
An outside force, a divine being cast light
into the abyss, warmed my soul,
calmed the raging ocean.
Serenity washed over me, warm water
engulfed me under it’s caressing waves
My vision clear, colors and hues appear
An oasis in the lonely desert.
Penetrating the consuming darkness.
Quenched the fire that feasted on fear.
I was free.
actually pretty good
the only change I’d make would be lines 3 and 4–to
“My personal abyss, vast as the ocean,
as deep as the darkest ravine,”
the vastness of sky seems too upbeat for the rest of the imagery
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Landmann Big Sky Fire Pit $118.99 This Big Sky Fire Pit features Tree Leaves cut outs and Georgia Clay finish. Sturdy steel construction is designed for easy assembly. It has a large 23.5″ diameter bowl with full diameter handle. Comes with full-size porcelain cooking grate. |
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Landmann Big Sky Fire Pit – Tree Leaves, Georgia Clay $199.98 23.5″ Steel Fire Bowl Safety Ring/handle for easy transport Spark screen and poker Full size enamel cooking 360 Degree fire viewing Color: Georgia Clay Can be used as a portable grill Dimensions: 26.5″ x 26.5″ x 23″ Weight: 32lb Model: 28346 |
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Landmann Big Sky Fire Pit Stars&MoonBlk $124.99 This Big Sky Fire Pit features Stars and Moon cut outs with a black finish. Sturdy steel construction is designed for easy assembly. It has a large 23.5″ diameter bowl with full diameter handle. Comes with full-size porcelain cooking grate. Includes poker and Spark guard. 29.5″LX29.5″WX23H 32 lbs. |
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Landmann Big Sky Fire Pit Western Black $118.99 This Big Sky Fire Pit features Western-themed cut outs with a black finish. Sturdy steel construction is designed for easy assembly. It has a large 23.5″ diameter bowl with full diameter handle. Comes with full-size porcelain cooking grate. Includes poker and Spark guard. 29.5″LX29.5″WX23H 32 lbs. |
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Landmann Big Sky Fire Pit Western Theme $118.99 This Big Sky Fire Pit features Western-themed cut outs and a Georgia Clay finish. Sturdy steel construction is designed for easy assembly. It has a large 23.5″ diameter bowl with full diameter handle. Comes with full-size porcelain cooking grate. Includes poker and Spark guard. 29.5″LX29.5″WX23H 32 lbs. |
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Landmann Big Sky Fire Pit Wildlife Black $124.99 This Big Sky Fire Pit features Wildlife-themed cut outs with a black finish. Sturdy steel construction is designed for easy assembly. It has a large 23.5″ diameter bowl with full diameter handle. Comes with full-size porcelain cooking grate. Includes poker and Spark guard. 29.5″LX29.5″WX23H 32 lbs. |
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Landmann Big Sky Fire Pit WildlifeTheme $118.99 This Big Sky Fire Pit features Wildlife-themed cut outs and a Georgia Clay finish. Sturdy steel construction is designed for easy assembly. It has a large 23.5″ diameter bowl with full diameter handle. Comes with full-size porcelain cooking grate. Includes poker and Spark guard. 29.5″LX29.5″WX23H 32 lbs. |
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Landmann Big Sky Western Fire Pit $126.64 Product Available in Georgia Clay or Black Finish LDM1010 Features: Western design Available separately in: Stars and Moon and Wildlife design Full diameter handle Large 23.5 diameter bowl Options: Available in Georgia Clay or Black finish Specifications: 360 degree viewing of the fire Dimensions: Dimensions: 23” H x 29.5” W x 29.5” D Disclaimer: Please Note: Item should be placed on a brick, stone or concrete surface to prevent fire hazards |
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Landmann Big Sky Western Fire Pit $126.64 Product Available in Georgia Clay or Black Finish LDM1010 Features: Western design Available separately in: Stars and Moon and Wildlife design Full diameter handle Large 23.5 diameter bowl Options: Available in Georgia Clay or Black finish Specifications: 360 degree viewing of the fire Dimensions: Dimensions: 23” H x 29.5” W x 29.5” D Disclaimer: Please Note: Item should be placed on a brick, stone or concrete surface to prevent fire hazards |
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Landmann Big Sky Wildlife Fire Pit $126.64 Product Available in Georgia Clay or Black Finish LDM1011 Features: Wildlife design Available separately in: Stars and Moon and Western design Full diameter handle Large 23.5 diameter bowl Options: Available in Georgia Clay or Black finish Specifications: 360 degree viewing of the fire Dimensions: Dimensions: 23” H x 29.5” W x 29.5” D Disclaimer: Please Note: Item should be placed on a brick, stone or concrete surface to prevent fire hazards |
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Landmann Big Sky Wildlife Fire Pit $126.64 Product Available in Georgia Clay or Black Finish LDM1011 Features: Wildlife design Available separately in: Stars and Moon and Western design Full diameter handle Large 23.5 diameter bowl Options: Available in Georgia Clay or Black finish Specifications: 360 degree viewing of the fire Dimensions: Dimensions: 23” H x 29.5” W x 29.5” D Disclaimer: Please Note: Item should be placed on a brick, stone or concrete surface to prevent fire hazards |
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Landmann Super Sky Fire Pit $199.98 36.5″ Steel Fire Bowl Safety Ring/handle for easy transport Spark screen and poker Weather Cover available Cooking Grate available 360 Degree fire viewing Dimensions: 43″ x 43″ x 23″ Weight: 49lb Model: 28905 |
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Landmann Super Sky Fire Pit Black $210.99 This large Fire Pit with black finish from Landmann USA has a 36.5 fire bowl with 41 percent more burn space than the regular Big Sky Fire Pits. It provides a 360 degree view of the fire. Unique and decorative Wild Life cutouts create an incredible ambiance at night. Its sturdy steel construction is designed for easy assembly. It has a Safety Ring handle for easy transport. Black spark screen and poker are included. Burn Surface Area 962 sq. in. Measures 43X43X23. Weighs 49 lbs. |
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Landmann Super Sky Fire Pit Black $208.99 This large Fire Pit in Georgia Clay finish from Landmann USA has a 36.5 inch fire bowl with 41 percentmore burn space than the regular Big Sky Fire Pits. It provides a 360 degree view of the fire. Unique and decorative Stars and Moons cutouts create an incredible ambiance at night. Its sturdy steel construction is designed for easy assembly. It has a Safety Ring handle for easy transport. Black spark screen and poker are included. Burn Surface Area 962 sq. in. Measures 43X43X23. Weighs 49 lbs. |
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Landmann Super Sky Fire Pit Cover $59.99 The Landmann Super Sky Fire Pit Cover is made to fit your Super Sky Fire Pit perfectly. With elasticized water-resistant nylon snuggly shielding your pit from the elements, you can rest assured there are many more fires in your future. Large 47-inch fire pit cover Designed for the Super Sky Fire Pit Protects your Fire Pit from the outside elements Weight: 1 lb. Overall dimensions: 47.5 diameter x 13.5 inches |
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Landmann Western Big Sky Fire Pit, Black $149 23.5″ Steel Fire Bowl Safety Ring/handle for easy transport Spark screen and poker Full size enamel cooking 360 Degree fire viewing Color: Black Can be used as a portable grill Dimensions: 26.5″ x 26.5″ x 23″ Weight: 32lb Model: 28346 |
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Patina Crossfire 31-Inch Fire Pit $239.98 The folks at Patina have really outdone themselves with this no-nonsense, fully assembled Patina Crossfire 31-inch Fire Pit . Designed to be taken anywhere and used as a pit or as a grill, it includes a grilling grate and handling rod for safely removing the lid and grate. When dinner’s done, prop your feet up on the outer ring and watch the moon cross the sky. The natural rust finish of this fire pit will age beautifully, especially compared to those that are designed to look best when brand new and slowly deteriorate over time. It’s truly an item that exhibits authentic preference for rustic over polished and real over synthetic. About Patina Products With headquarters on the central coast of California, where warm days and cool nights make outdoor patio living second nature, Patina Products takes pride in its art and offers the finest in outdoor living accessories with a gorgeous natural patina finish. Since 2001, Patina Products has been warming up gardens, outdoor rooms, and patios with its impressive line of unique fire pits and other products. They use specially designed CNC (computer numeric control) plasma cutters to cut virtually any logo or brand into the side of a custom fire pit. The company designs its fresh, original line of garden art in its studio overlooking the Pacific Ocean. The business began as an evolution. After 15 years in the pharmaceutical industry, the owners of Patina Products knew two things: how to run a successful business, and that they wanted a more creative outlet to express their love of outdoors and home decor. With beautiful decor items from Patina Products, your patio will become your favorite room of your house. Includes grated lid, handle, grill, and cover Constructed from heavy-duty steel, natural rust finish Deep drawn from cold rolled steel Flames glow through cutout design Poker included Bowl diameter: 24 inches Measures 31diam. x 17H inches |
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Patina Evening Sky 31-Inch Fire Pit Set $229.99 It won’t matter if your evening is cloudy, because once you light a roaring fire in your Patina Evening Sky 31-Inch Fire Pit, the moon will shine and the stars will twinkle as your cheerful fire flickers through moon and star cutouts. Take the chill off, cook an outdoor dinner, or both with this sturdy, metal-bottom, three-legged fire pit. Hand-crafted of cold-rolled steel, this fire pit is heavy-duty. Comes complete with a BBQ grill insert for cooking, a spark arresting safety screen and poker for stirring the coals. Attractive rust patina finish. No assembly required. Free fire pit cover is included! If you plan to use your fire pit on a wood deck, we recommend placing it over a protective pad or paving stones which can be purchased at your local hardware store. About Patina Products Inspired by the warm days and cool nights of the central coast of California, Patina Products offers fine outdoor accessories to turn your patio into a real living space. For over 10 years, the company has been warming up gardens and patios with unique, hand-crafted fire pits. They use specially designed CNC (computer numeric control) plasma cutters to cut virtually any logo or brand into the side of a custom fire pit. The gorgeous natural patina finish on each pit will age beautifully over time for an authentic, rustic look. Let Patina Products create a fire pit that suits your unique style, and make the patio your favorite room of the house. Heavy-duty steel construction Rust patina finish 1-year warranty Free fire pit cover Grill insert, spark screen, and poker are included 31-inch diameter |
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Patina Products Evening Sky Fire Pit with Cover $230.09 PTP1090 Features: Manufactured from cold-rolled steel for durability FREE Fire Pit Cover! Evening Sky cut outs provide safe ventilation with a protective inner spark screen Portable design allows fire pit to be moved easily Sturdy, welded legs for stability and safety Safety ring surrounding fire pit Comes fully assembled Optional stand is not included and must be purchased separately 24” steel fire bowl Black vinyl with drawstring closure Diameter: 32” Includes: Includes spark screen cover, poker, and bbq grill insert (pictured below) Color/Finish: Natural rust patina finish Dimensions: 31” diameter safety ring Dimensions: 16” H x 31” W x 31” D Dimensions: 3” H x 12” W x 12” D Warranty: Five-year warranty protects fire pit from rusting or burning through Disclaimer: Please Note: Item should be placed on a brick, stone or concrete surface to prevent fire hazards |
